Ahoj!
Quicky typo list:
- interrupted Carson woe jaw had just dropped.
- MAIN ROADSTEAD WHIICH - x2
- "Perhaps we should explore increasing our exports from Sweden as an alternative plan," - shouldn't it be "imports"?
- "This is the first that I had heard about this, First Lord," commented Kitchener, "Why was I not notified sooner?" - not a typo - I have a feeling "commented" is too weak a word here ...
- and Admiral Oliver ha sat on the first. - Oliver is creeping ever closer to a firing squad, I'd say ...
- Wilson paused a few seconds before replying, "Did this intelligence come the Admiralty, sir"
- as I do very muc believe
- Goodbye,." - redundant coma
- ------Patrickswell (Limerick) 2100 hrs - I believe that this should be happening in the dark
- now began to arrive Helena & St. Constantine where they
- Opalchnie - I'm not sure of the "a" in that word. The root is "polk" (from Old Germanic "volk"), with opolchenie literally meaning "to (put into) a regiment", i.e. embody , so I believe it should be written with an "o";
- Te former Buffalo Soldier
A very nice read!
Borys
Quicky typo list:
- interrupted Carson woe jaw had just dropped.
- MAIN ROADSTEAD WHIICH - x2
- "Perhaps we should explore increasing our exports from Sweden as an alternative plan," - shouldn't it be "imports"?
- "This is the first that I had heard about this, First Lord," commented Kitchener, "Why was I not notified sooner?" - not a typo - I have a feeling "commented" is too weak a word here ...
- and Admiral Oliver ha sat on the first. - Oliver is creeping ever closer to a firing squad, I'd say ...
- Wilson paused a few seconds before replying, "Did this intelligence come the Admiralty, sir"
- as I do very muc believe
- Goodbye,." - redundant coma
- ------Patrickswell (Limerick) 2100 hrs - I believe that this should be happening in the dark
- now began to arrive Helena & St. Constantine where they
- Opalchnie - I'm not sure of the "a" in that word. The root is "polk" (from Old Germanic "volk"), with opolchenie literally meaning "to (put into) a regiment", i.e. embody , so I believe it should be written with an "o";
- Te former Buffalo Soldier
A very nice read!
Borys
