Welcome to the Board. I found this an engaging story even with the gap. There are a few internal inconsistencies the two most bothersome being:
1] The pirates appear to have gunpowder but the rest of the story seems medieval
2] Amber did not go to the Princess Training School contrary to what she says at the end but was already a Princess and was mere polished for her new role by her father.
1] The pirates appear to have gunpowder but the rest of the story seems medieval
2] Amber did not go to the Princess Training School contrary to what she says at the end but was already a Princess and was mere polished for her new role by her father.
